Release Blitz ~ Accidentally On Purpose By J.M. Snyder (Reviews Excerpt + Giveaway)
Length: 50,000 words approx.
Publisher: JMS Books
Blurb
With the help of his nephew Brooks, Alan concocts a plan to try and get Jim's attention "accidentally on purpose." It works, but as things heat up between them, Alan worries what Jim will think if he finds out their getting together was no accident.
Then Brooks goes missing, and Alan's going to have to come clean. But is he the only one not being truthful?
Excerpt
Standing on his porch is Detective Jim Garrison with the Richmond police. Dressed in a navy suit and tie, Garrison is a good decade younger than Alan and it shows. He’s sternly handsome, with a wide jaw and smooth, clean-shaven cheeks. His thin lips have a natural redness to them Alan wants to taste. He wears his thick brown hair short, combing the length on top to the left. He tilts his head that way, too, as if afraid to ruin the part. His dark bedroom eyes soften when he sees Alan.
In his gruff voice, Garrison says, “Mr. Travers, hello.”
“Detective.” Alan wonders if his own voice sounds as high out loud as it does in his head. Clearing his throat, he adds, “Nice to see you again.”
Understatement of the year.
“Well,” Garrison drawls, “you might change your mind when you find out the reason why I’m here.”
Alan presses his lips together to keep from grinning. “Oh no. Don’t tell me it’s Brooks again?”
“You are aware there’s a curfew for anyone under eighteen?”
Of course he does. Garrison knows he does. The detective has been here for the same reason before. More than once.
“I know, I do,” Alan says. “But I didn’t know he wasn’t here, honest. The last I heard from him, he turned in around nine. Long day, you know. He was out at the high school football game earlier. Here I thought he was upstairs sleeping this whole time.”
Garrison narrows his eyes, and for a moment, Alan wonders if the jig is up. Then the detective lets out a weary sigh. “Yeah, well, he wasn’t.”
“Where’s he now?” Alan leans closer, pretending to look out at Garrison’s unmarked car but really trying to catch a whiff of the detective’s cologne. Calvin Klein’s Eternity, if he isn’t mistaken. Light, sexy, and seductive. He’d love to wake up with that scent on his pillows.
Get a grip, man. He isn’t here to see you.
Well, that isn’t exactly true. He is here to see Alan, but only about Brooks being out after curfew, again. Even if he does smell damn delicious.
“In the car,” Garrison says. “Front seat, don’t worry. He isn’t under arrest.”
“Maybe he should be,” Alan mutters. This time he allows himself a quick smile to show he’s only kidding. Mostly. “Didn’t he want to get out?”
Garrison turns now, too. The driver’s side window is down, and through it Alan can almost see the long black sleeve of the hoodie Brooks likes to wear. A faint light flickers inside the vehicle; Brooks on his cell phone, texting someone or playing one of his games.
Alan leans out a little more, crossing his arms in front of his chest. The night’s chilly this late. Ducking down, he can see farther into the car, and for one brief instant, Brooks glances his way. Alan raises his voice so it carries easily across the yard. “Coming in sometime tonight then, son?”
Brooks’s dramatic sigh can be heard all the way to the porch. The phone’s light goes out; a moment later, the passenger side door opens and Brooks doesn’t step so much as fling himself out of the vehicle. Angrily the door slams shut behind him.
In a low voice only Garrison can hear, Alan murmurs, “Someone has an attitude.”
“It could be worse,” Garrison suggests.
Alan looks at the detective, who’s watching Brooks approach and can’t see the naked want Alan knows has to be written all over his face. God, this man. So close Alan could reach out and touch him, if he dared. Careful, mate, he warns himself. Don’t go scaring him away just because you’re too damn eager.
Fighting against everything in him that wants Jim Garrison, Alan tries to keep his voice steady as he asks, “How, exactly?”
Garrison shrugs, and in the gesture, Alan sees a friendliness that makes his heart sing. It’s almost familiar, as if they might be more to each other than what it looks like tonight. Garrison raises his voice a little, so Brooks can overhear. “He isn’t into drugs or alcohol or fighting. You should see some of the riff raff I have to deal with some nights.”
Brooks has closed the distance between the car and house, and now he stomps up the porch steps with exaggerated force. His pale skin stands out against his black hoodie and jeans; even his hair is black, so dark it looks almost blue under the porch light.
“He just likes to run off at all hours.” Alan reaches out and ruffles that thick, inky hair, getting in a good rub before Brooks ducks out of reach. “You’re lucky you aren’t old enough to spend the night in jail.”
Brooks glares at Alan from under his dark fringe. “If I were older, I wouldn’t be picked up for breaking curfew,” he mutters. “I don’t even know why it matters anyway. It’s Friday. I don’t have to get up early for school tomorrow.”
“Curfew’s the same every night,” Garrison says, “school or not. You know that by now. How many times have I picked you up after eleven?”
Brooks doesn’t answer, just shoves his hands in his pockets and scuffs his shoe as he frowns at the floor.
“Third time this month, innit?” Alan asks.
Brooks mumbles something under his breath.
“What’s that?” Leaning out the door, Alan cups a hand around his ear. “Speak up, son. I’m a little hard of hearing.”
Brooks glowers. “I said can I go in now? God.”
Alan can’t leave it alone. “Are you going to stay in there this time, then?”
With an aggravated sigh, Brooks pushes past Alan into the house. He storms upstairs, stomping with more force than before, if that’s possible.
Alan shares an amused smile with Garrison. “He’ll tear the house down if he isn’t careful. Thanks again for bringing him in.”
“No problem.”
Then, to Alan’s surprise, Garrison doesn’t make any move to leave.
Am I reading this right? Alan barely dares to hope.
**Copy provided to Bayou Book Junkie by Signal Boost Promotions for my reading pleasure in hopes of an unbiased opinion, a review was not a requirement.**
Accidentally on Purpose is the story of 53-year old Alan crushing on 42-year old police officer Jim. When Alan can’t manage to be an adult in his quest to talk to Jim, his teenage nephew comes up with a plan of being picked up by the detective and brought home to allow the two men time together. And that plan and the resulting actions have the consequences any sane adult would expect.
One reason I love to read books with more mature characters is I enjoy not reading the insecurity of the young adult and the game playing. Alan is definitely not a mature 53-year-old. He’s insecure, laments his old age the majority of the book and follows the schemes of a teenage boy on how to run into his crush again. And, in the end, his teenage nephew is more mature and says just tell him you like him. Seems simple. And fortunately, Jim also doesn’t like game playing and puts an end to Alan’s ridiculous games that could have really put his nephew in danger.
This book had funny sections and was a little ridiculous. There were some things about Alan that rubbed me the wrong way which then made him not as likable to me. He constantly referred to his nephew’s girlfriend as “little girlfriend” and it just sounded condescending. Especially from a man who has a 14-year-old nephew who’s more mature than him and from who he has to take advice from. And his constant complaining about his age was TOO much.
Jim was a really likable character and was a saint to stick around after everything Alan and his nephew pulled. He was easily likable but a hard ass. Brooks, Alan’s nephew was also likable though he really needed some adult guidance in his life.
Overall, this story was a quick read. If you’re looking for a romance with characters above the average age of most romance stories, you need to grab this one.
Rating: 4 stars
3.5 Stars!
Alan bumps into Jim at the cafe one morning and can't seem to forget about the handsome detective. When he finds out that Jim sometimes enforces the curfew at the mall, he goes along with his nephew's plan to get caught and brought home by the detective to give Alan a chance to talk to him more.
This story was cute, bringing two older men together with the "help" of a fourteen-year-old nephew. I found myself enjoying the story, especially when they bantered and flirted. The story is written in third person, which for some reason threw me off at times; maybe I haven't read a book in third person for far too long. I liked Alan and Jim. Alan clearly feels out touch with dating after too many years between dates, but thankfully, Jim is there to reassure and help him. I liked that Jim was willing to take the lead when needed and was understanding. I liked that Jim took Bryce's disappearance seriously and helped Alan keep it together long enough to sort everything out. Their little truth session towards the end was quite enlightening and funny. I liked them together and was happy to see them later in the epilogue.
If you want two older men finding love in spite of a teenager that thinks he knows how to help his uncle date, this book is for you.
*** Copy provided to Bayou Book Junkie for my reading pleasure, a review wasn't a requirement. ***
4 Stars
This book is on the shorter side, but it was really cute, light and fun. I liked that the two main characters were a little older 40’s-50’s but that they still acted like they were years younger. Almost like the new relationship they formed took years off of them. I thought the premise of the story involving Alan’s nephew Bryce was funny and actually something I had never read before which was refreshing. I liked that Jim just went with the flow when Alan was inevitably making an idiot of himself lol. And that they both had little secrets to admit to in the end. These characters were all really likable and I am really glad I picked up this book to read.
*** Copy provided to Bayou Book Junkie for my reading pleasure, a review wasn't a requirement.***
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